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Haha. And you're only in the first semester! It gets worse... Also, you should tell this picture to stop staring at me. It's a little unnerving.

Ahh, this is much better! :D

Numbers aren't evil, Fred is though. He was spawned from the dark pool of goo. Actually, the most evil thing in your post was the comma splice. :P

Is 6666 an evil number? Discuss.

I've had the Arctic Monkeys in my head ALL DAY because of this, lol. You should really put up part 4. :D These are very good to listen to when ...

She... doesn't really look like a siren. More like a naked human with slightly elfish ears. But she's very pretty nonetheless! :D

Hehehe, we have trees just like it here, so I guess the first one really doesn't do anything for me. Besides, the background stuff is blurred, and though I want ...

Hmmm... I don't know. I like the poem in a weird way, because it's such a freewrite, but still... it doesn't seem to say a lot. I mean, it just ...

Awww... the ending is so cute! This reminds me of Shel Silverstein or something similar, and that's good. ^_^ I think you should make your first stanza like the others ...

This was pretty cool because it asked questions instead of ranting about how horrible life was, which is really quite good, since there is too much of poetry out there ...

How odd! My favorite stanzas were even. I think I liked them the best because of the bowing trees and the dancing lilies. I mean, the rest of the description ...

Hehehe, I read this poem about winter and then yours! XD Anyway, I think you're being a little too obvious on your metaphors. I mean, I understand that you're trying ...

The second one is weird and looks like it was photoshopped poorly, so I don't really like it as much. That, and frankly the parasol looks a bit too idolistic. ...

Lovely poem! ^___^ One thing I would recommend... in the third stanza, you used a lot of "and" words. And that's bad. I can understand repetition, to an extent, but ...

Gummy, you know I love you. But you have too many typos here for me to love this piece. And I don't care if it's supposed to be artistic, because ...