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Ooo! I liked this! And, though you might not have intended for this, I can see some big "Adam and Eve" metaphor, and that just kmakes me happy. Very sophisticated ...

Oh my, you are right! This was a fun read! :D I have to say, this has been one of my favorite poems on YWS for quite a while, simply ...

First of all, I rated this for you! Next time, be sure to rate your poems and stories, because then they get to appear on the front page of YWS. ...

Of course it classifies as poetry! :D Interesting idea! I haven't really seen anything like this so far, so good for you! :D And I think it's pretty cool that ...

Haha, I had Number 7 as an avvie once, and it freaked Nate out. It was kind of funny. xD

Basically, choose a work from the person above you and critique it. Then put the title and link of the story/poem/thingy you critiqued on this thread. Then somebody gets to ...

Banned for not having a real country!

OMG! *flails*

Edited! Thank you once more for all your comments... they were very helpful. :) Hopefully, I made the relationship with the boy and the policeman a little bit more clearer. ...

Somebody called you pretentious today. It was not that which bugged you, because you have been called that many times before. It was the way it was said, the classic ...

I was reading the YWS blog and one of the articles was about how publishing was getting harder to get into now that the traditional literary magazines. Which makes sense, ...

It's... a pig. :P

!!!!!!!!! *GLOMPS*

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I can edit shorter stuff, but I have yet to even touch my NaNo novels from two years ago. Any sugestions on tackling larger projects? ~Yoyo 8) Actually... yes. Print ...