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Opening credits: Chorale, BWV 645, "Wachet Auf, Ruft Uns Die Stimme - Bach First Date: It's A Sin - Pet Shop Boys Falling In Love: Medley: Rip It Up / ...

Actually, I have to disagree with aeroman, for the first paragraph anyway. I think that, too often writers don't put any scenery in at all, just because they want action ...

Um, regular people suck. Why would I ever want to write something for those sods? You write something for me to enjoy, then maybe I will consider writing an ode ...

Quick thing I just noticed! It should be "February" not "Febuary."

*wipes tongue on carpet* *which is an expression of disgust, for those uninformed* Ahem... [spoiler]Oh, my God. Ew. Ew. Ew. They were not supposed to do that. That was gross ...

...And ME , as the King of YWS. Sounds rigged! Bah, just kidding. Congrats to both of yeh. You're just jealous you're not the prom queen... :P

Banned for having an animated avatar. :P

Hehe, I'm a twin. :)

Eep! Those typos are fixed. And... what did you mean in that last part? :?

Hehe! Well, you're going to love the spell checker here. :) We have it for people just like you. :) Anyway! Welcome! I think I've critiqued some of your poems? ...

It's kind of a discontinued grocery list sort of poem, except instead of potatoes and marshmallows, you're ordering angst. :P

Haha, I should photoshop Hun and Ari in the same picture! (And put my face on both of them...)

Angle?

This poem doesn't really... seem like a poem. You might want to change the sounds a little more, to make it more poetic. ;)

Eep, you spellchecked, it looks like, but you chose the wrong words, I think! Like, "Let the rears pour out your eyes." Read it a bit more carefully, edit your ...