Snoink

Yeah! Wet dogs. So cute. I don't know if this is bad, but when I read it, I tried to picture it. And I tried to forget the title. And ...

That review is from two years ago, Snoink.... I know! But I refound it! xD

Oh god... I nearly wet myself laughing. XD Smileys and words fail utterly to convey the vast swirl of emotions that are erupting behind my blank stare. What the heck ...

The only problem I see with it is that it might encourage members who don't have enough reviews to offer some rather sub-par ones in order to get to 25. ...

What is a snow day? :P

Squallz>> Yeah, I know I'm not supposed to be replying to other people's critiques... but still! :D In the story Samson and Delilah, Delilah betrays Samson after Samson loves her. ...

Archangel Michael? Samson and Delilah? :P Anyway! My biggest peeve was it didn't really seem like she was really in a cathedral. If they were talking and everything, there would ...

Quick nitpicky thing! Debts do not die off when people die off in that time period. So, just because the dad commits suicide, that doesn't mean his debt is forgiven. ...

*Moved to Other*

*adds stuff* This is Anglican, but it's from the fun two-thousand year old tradition things that the Catholics have, too. ^_^ Random symbolic things you might be able to use: ...

Wow... that's hilarious!! :lol: So whatever happened to the rest of FREAK? Is it ever going to acutally get published? ~Yoyo 8) ... after finals, I'll submit it in. Really... ...

Lovely stuff here! Was communism a bad thing back then? I seem to remember that America was trying to be "friends" with Russia, so it was still okay. A better ...

This story... does not make sense. 1. Why would the character be so dismissive? She has apparently been put into a fantasy scenery and her biggest concern is that this ...

First of all, welcome to YWS! It's nice to see you here. The topic is interesting, because sin is an interesting topic. It can be so JUICY. Still, this is ...

Don't rhyme. You're dealing with too much substance to worry about making every single line rhyme, and it's killing your poem. So write what you're really thinking, and screw any ...