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First of all, welcome to YWS! Next of all, I am an evil reviewer. XD Oh well. Here's my slightly sadistic critique of your first two paragraphs. Enjoy? :P It ...

Very emo-ish! XD But (and here's the important thing!) you pulled it off! You have an ear for poetry and what sounds good with each other, which means that you ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! Now... for the critique [s]of doom and destruction[/s] that you've been waiting for! :D It stalks the night, it stalks the day It seeks out ...

Orange orangoutangs ogle ornery ogres organizing orgasmic oral orca orgies. NEXT LETTER: I

XD I know. But I'm on a serious sugar high so since one word was already wrong I decided to play it off as a joke and make them both ...

You guys are crazy. :P

Hi! If you have any questions on math, be feel free to ask me -- I am a math tutor. :)

Good luck on being a writier! :D And... ***LOCKED***

Oink! :D

Jacke! *glomples*

No plagiarizing. *LOCKED*

Get him a journal and have him write in it for 20 minutes of whatever he wants. That might get him to at least use a pencil faster.

First of all, please please PLEASE do not put your full name on any of your works, especially with so much information as to who you are (school info, etc.), ...

I would totally put, "It smells like fear." Just because too often, people fear being passionate. :)

:( This is so not cool.