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Obviously, with responses like that. Be constructive, or don't comment. Touché Master Mod, but I was offering an honest suggesion in my mentioning of medication and the like. So sorry ...

At the moment, this is just a rant. The reader is being treated as someone who is at fault when that might not be the case at all. Passion is ...

I don't think you're a poopy head, Suz. Thank you, Tri. ^_^ It makes more sense in context: "I wish I could write poetry, but no, I'm just a poo ...

What the...? A "poopy head"? Aren't you a little old to talk about that? Well.... technically, she called herself a poo head, but my poetic license said that she was ...

I would probably expand it with dialogue and all that pretty stuff. I don't know... call me a fan for dialogue, but I would have her listened, bored, to her ...

Lol! I wish it were raining here. It's sunny everyday though. Slightly annoying. :P I love the idea! The only thing I really had a qualm with was that the ...

As promised, I'm commenting! Sorry it took a while... my mom took one look at my room and flipped out, so of course I had to clean it. ;) Now, ...

Hehe, nobody commented on this. Weeeeeeird. :P Anyway! This doesn't seem like flash fiction at all since it really doesn't have a conclusive ending. In fact, it looks like it ...

Sammus! Merry Critmas to you! I hope for the best, and maybe I can steal some of the snow that you have and make it my own. :) Here's your ...

so no one liked this? will if my true feelings dont work, i dont know what will :( Awww... that's not it at all! We're not critiquing your feelings... only ...

I know that the math department is interested in the journal, if only because I wrote a story about the magical penguin that lives in the math lab (and yes, ...

Focus more on her rather than your feelings of her, because let's face it: it's a lot more romantic if you're writing about her eyes and such rather than, "OHMYGOSH, ...

I think you can make it more obvious, actually. Right now, it's all over the place. Is it a message against wife-beating, drunk driving, or relaxing? Or perhaps it discourages ...

To be fair, I helped her. XD

It was taken out of context. And you realize I am not Clau? XD Silence you, or I shall take out the SPORK OF DEATH.