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Wait... what if magic is just a common occurrence in this land?

Don't worry about it. Just write. :) One time, my brother and I were trying to come up with the least cliched story... then we started naming the inspirations for ...

**Moved to Writing Tips** Okay... now my thoughts? Do it! It's awesome. We love ands and buts. ;) No, but seriously, there's a song called, "And I Love Her" and ...

The error that Grif got was for SPEW.

Haha... he sounds sexy, of course. And yay! I don't think it's possible to fix the last line, but whatever. We get the idea, so it works. :P

You start off with a fairly interesting start (at least interesting for us writers anyway) but then... you get off topic. What exactly is the point you want to make? ...

Back on topic, please.

SPAM! **Locked**

Then... don't chat? :? I know there were several months I didn't touch the chatroom, I disliked it so much. :P

I've only skimmed this, but it looks pretty good! I'll definitely read through it later and give you a less lame critique when I'm more awake. ;) Just two things: ...

I would say thank you to everyone, except all the people I want to thank are forcing me to edit FREAK. So thank you everyone! Now... off to FREAK. And ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! Like Cade said, you'll want to do a couple of critiques before you post your own work. :) Anyway, your poem! I think, at this ...

...where's Pat Buchanan when you need him?

You do dialogue like people writing Spanish do! Who would have thought? I enjoyed it thoroughly, actually. Which is slightly rare because there are few pieces that I'll sit and ...

Er... welcome! :D If you have anymore questions, just ask any random member, lol. Anyone can probably help you. And, if you need big help, ask me. I'm a modtastic ...