Snoink

The reason why it's not working is because it's too rushed. You spent all this time talking about dresses, using all these bloated adjectives and everything to describe it, but ...

Go through an agent.

I think I scared all of my members... but still! Fun stuff! XD

This has several conflicting messages. The narrator hates life and yet he would be perfectly happy if he goes to another place? Confusing! So this guy obviously doesn't really hate ...

EDIT: Bam! It's gone! :D ORIGINAL POST: By popular request, here it is in .rtf form. Unzip it to see it!

EDIT: FREAK is gone! I told you it was for a limited time only. :P Anyway, it's been downloaded 62 times and I've gotten nine critiques, so I am somewhat ...

I have to agree with kittykat. Maybe it's the several days I've spent of editing a story, but there seem like a lot of unnecessary words that were not too ...

Snoink: Oh, I know. Now he has it all up and pretty. But the fact that he didn't have it then on his site when I looked is slightly disconcerting ...

Why do you think he's an idiot? In the early part of the race, he seemed to have absolutely no clue what he was doing and very unsure of himself, ...

-_- Obama is an idiot. I really really really REALLY hope he doesn't win.

You can always rewrite it!

Yay! I can't wait to change my name to "Pixyunicorn322" again! :D

The error that Grif got was for SPEW. That's because SPEW doesn't exist. Can't help ya on that score. Suddenly the world makes sense... :o Thanks!

Okay, this may seem like a bizarre writing tip, but I know a lot of writers have this problem. It's called... muscle ache. Basically what happens is you write (or ...

Write your ideas down, focus on one and then categorically go through each idea until finally you finish each as a story. :D