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Meh. 1) Your misspellings suck. I don't care whether this is written in the view of a four-year-old--not many parents would give a four-year-old a butter knife in the first ...

Poor Hunter... :P

This is much too preachy to be considered anything but a rant. Perhaps you can try a little symbolism or metaphor to make it seem like you're not slamming your ...

Haha, yes, plenty ironic. :P This poem is too rhyming. I realize that you're trying to achieve a sarcastic tone with the rhyme and wording, but it doesn't seem to ...

This poem rhymes, but it doesn't really say anything. Focus more on your meaning more than the rhyming--that's what matters anyway. ;)

Hello and welcome to YWS! :D Remember to up your review count before posting your own stuff. ;) Here are my notes on your poem... hopefully they'll help you? I ...

Er... just write about whatever you want. As long as you love what you're doing, it'll be okay in the end. :D

Um... going back on topic... I believe that neither of your options are completely correct. I think it's a little bit of both. Just as heterosexuality involves both the psyche ...

Hi, and welcome to YWS! :D I was wondering on two main points. You have her active in all these drama organizations and plays, and yet she doesn't have many ...

LOL. When something of this sort is put in Randomness, you know it's going to be trouble. :P

Do whatever the story wills you to do. ;)

It wouldn't quite make sense that way, or at least in the way I intend it to be. >

Okay, so I'm writing the synopsis for FREAK and the words "sexual favors" seems to come up in my brain when describing the second part of the story. I sort ...

So that way novels wouldn't be 7 pages long? :D I like it!

I imagined you with dark, dark hair. So yeah. Weird.... Anyway! I got attacked by a bear today. Bear, meet YWS. YWS? Meet Bear. *hides* He's so big! Anyway... say ...