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Don't ever censor yourself because you don't want to offend people. With that said, China and Germany is a bad idea, but that's the most interesting idea you have. Good ...

I have to agree with Jabber. History should intertwine all the ethnic groups because we all move together in this world.

How come there aren't already gun laws in America? You;d think that after Columbine it would be the obvious thing to do. Second Amendment, darling. We love it, apparently. To ...

Next time when you want to bring up a debate topic, remember to bring up a question or something for people to debate on. ^^ ***Locked***

Yay! Pickles! Welcome to YWS! :D In this poem, you put five million poems in one poem! Unfortunately, that makes it seem like it's only a little excerpt instead of ...

Hehe, I have less than a sixth posted here, so I'm not terribly concerned... it's really not that much. ^^ And you lucky Canadians! That is one year here, without ...

Thanks for all your comments! ^_^ And I just looked here and I found that FREAK's been downloaded 46 times and only had nine comments or so (some have been ...

Er... you did know that was a joke, right? :P

Dude, you are awesome. Like, amazingly awesome. Congrats!

You bug a mod. Those are the guys in green. ;) I locked them for you, since the advice may come in handy (if you want to continue writing poetry ...

Er... I just concentrated on the characters. Whatever the characters thought was natural, I didn't dwell on too much, as far as technology goes or society difference. That way, it ...

Yay! It's her highness's anniversary! *snugs*

All three. Maybe that's why it's taken so long...

This seems too much like a list. Don't worry about constricting your poem into a particular format -- let your soul pour out. It'll be much prettier that way.

The ending with the drunk, mad father is... so cliched. And it doesn't make sense. I mean... *head explodes* 1) If her father is a mean drunk and such, and ...