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Re: Spirited 0.1
Haha, this is ooooold! Anyway! It's a cool beginning and reminds me of "Stranger than Fiction." And you should continue it. Because it's cool like that. :)
Mar 16, 2008 -
Re: Midnight Run - Chap. 1
Hello! First of all, welcome to YWS, seeing as I've never seen you before and stuff. Next of all, I read your chapter! Exciting? I think so! I don't want ...
Mar 16, 2008 -
Re: Benedict's Goodbye
“Mr. Benedict, are you over here?” "Over there" sounds more natural. Oh, Hell. I’d known they’d find me soon enough. But damn. Any reason for the curses besides just because? ...
Mar 16, 2008 -
Re: The questions to life we will never know.
Good! Spring break is finally here and my brains are starting to ooze out. It's awesome. :) And you, AV? :)
Mar 16, 2008 -
Re: Woman stays in Toilet for Two Years
O_O
Mar 14, 2008 -
Re: Stand Still As I Stab Your Heart
Edited slightly. ^^
Mar 12, 2008 -
Re: Foreign Markets: 1x02 "The Package" /P
Haha, printers are worth more than people any day! Just a little side note on lube and eating it by itself: there was this time where a bunch of friends ...
Mar 12, 2008 -
Re: Vatican Announces New Sins
Thanks for clarifying that, Nate! :D
Mar 11, 2008 -
Re: A Synopsis?
Write an outline for your story. No, not the one that you had originally, because odds are that it sucks. Rewrite your outline and see what's important. Then flesh out ...
Mar 11, 2008 -
Re: Vatican Announces New Sins
Apparently, the pope is not much into bioengineering... XD
Mar 11, 2008 -
Re: Torture
Hehehe, what was the question? :P You posted the knowledge... not the question!
Mar 11, 2008 -
Re: Concerto for Flute
:P I forgot not all people were musicians. Oh well! Leggero = lightly sposina = a light bridal dance And yeah... thanks for all the comments so far!
Mar 11, 2008 -
Re: Lemon Sonata
Oh God... this has got to be the best thing I've read on YWS for a while, and it's definitely the best thing by you I've seen. It's so innocent ...
Mar 11, 2008 -
Re: Assassin story!
Before you go on about how much it sucks, etc., please please please note that this was written two years ago as a way to fight writer's block and I ...
Mar 11, 2008 -
Re: Concerto for Flute
You know she's a flutist because she strikes up to join the rest of her band with her shoulders powdery white and bare despite il maestro's orders. But nobody minds ...
Mar 10, 2008
