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Either or? If it's more techno-y, I would put it in the sci fi section and if it's more classical, I would put it in the fantasy section. If it's ...

The word "il" is actually "the" in Italian, describing a masculine object, such as a maestro. So no, not a typo. ^^

How old are these people? They seem to be in high school since they act like awkward teenagers to each other, yet they are dealing with hearts and whatnot, so ...

Wait.... what? This prologue doesn't really make sense. At all. Throw away this prologue and come up with the interesting story instead. This doesn't tell you anything, it doesn't inspire ...

Crimson Tear. It sounds cooler. ^_^

I shall join! Name: Richard (known as Dirty Dick, or Dick for short) Age: 31 Gender: male Occupation: First Mate Bio: He was keelhauled when he was a sailor for ...

I don't think he would be able to cry. It just doesn't make sense.

Kiwi!!! *eats* Er... welcome to YWS! :D I'm a mod, so feel free to complain to me if you want to complain. See you around!

Haha, I love your use of sharp imagery. That poem was like eating cheddar... yummy! And unlike Fand, I dig the colloquialism. :) Anyway! This was awkward: And anyway, the ...

This has a really really good title that pulled me in and made me want to read this poem. That's a good thing. Now... to the poem itself. It's random. ...

Yes... I can imagine this now. I am walking down the street and suddenly someone stops in the middle of the road and says these immortal lines: "I'm done for, ...

Yuck. This is just description of what lies do to somebody. Big deal. I can tell you how to make a buffered system using chemistry, but just because I can ...

Griffinkeeper *is* the same person. So bug him. He'll be tickled pink to see you. :) I'm his sister, by the way. I heard a lot of good things about ...

*nibbles* Welcome to YWS! We don't bite... hard. But I think you'll find this a good place just to get feedback from your peers on your work and stuff. :D

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