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Er, buy guys' pants? Yes, but this causes the women to spend more time sewing in order to get tailor the lengths and the fitting right for women. Instead of ...

In the juniors section for women, the pockets are small. In fact, they're way too small. The only thing you can fit there is a couple of coins and a ...

All right... Here's the stuff I found: This should give you information that really could sway in both directions. I know this is all US info. so keep that in ...

Aedomir and khfan>> Cool it or I will lock this thread. Personal insults are not allowed. Anyway. I am actually somewhat against the idea of animals being euthanized. That is, ...

Hahaha... I bet she'll cry when she reads this post. ;) Bye Ari! You're ggoing to be soooo awesome. I'm glad our military will have you. :D

Nate, I don't think "The bike was wobbly" is an active verb; isn't it stative? The sentence is telling, not showing. Perhaps "The bike wobbled as if in distress" would ...

Hahaha... it's not satanic. It's just the fans being slightly rabid and high. xD

What's wrong with focusing too much on dialogue? Conversations and interactions are what makes a story. Well, I've had someone tell me that I needed to cut back in dialogue ...

So! I saw your blog and see you wanted to rewrite your story because it is "embarrassing." So, I figured I would give you a heads up on what exactly ...

Car thief held after stand-off with boars Fri May 23, 3:34 PM ET BERLIN (Reuters) - German police pursuing a car thief through a dark forest turned rescuers when the ...

You can't just edit out the last stanza because it's too political! I mean, that's the whole punch of your poem. It would be like getting rid of the ending ...

Haha, I welcomed you in the welcome threads, and then I found out that nobody critiqued your works! What a shame! So I will. And I think I am a ...

Hahaha... literally amazing as in it being a literary work or it being literally amazing? ;) But it's all good, no matter what case! I'm glad you're prepared to get ...

Smoo's a cave! :D But yeah. Welcome to YWS!

Hahaha... I know what you mean. My little sister consistently beats me in writing contests. Heck, she even presented one of her papers at Stanford! Talk about beating my socks ...