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Haha, you are a crazy person, you realize this? :P Anyway, I may just be perverted and stuff, but I want more action! I mean, you got me hooked as ...

ZOMG! I think this might be the first thing of yours I have ever commented on! So lots of apologies... I should have been looking harder. But better late than ...

Okay! So I've seen you around YWS and you seem to be an awesome critiquer. So I won't try to tone this critique down for you. I think you can ...

Aha! And so we meet again! :D I don't know which of my critiques you'll read first, so I'll basically introduce myself again, just to be nice. :D I'm a ...

One of my friends is intensely logical, but he has a good eye for reading people. Like, he'll notice things about us emotional people that we won't notice because we're ...

:shock: I have no life. Officially.

No pointing fingers at anybody! :o

I was reminded by another poem from this poem, and I just want to share it with you really quick before I begin with the critique. Why? Because I want ...

Aha! My friend and I do that too... it's nice to have artists as friends. XD

Okay, now that the warning is there... enjoy! How To Behave On An Internet Forum ^_^

Hahahaha, you don't want my rants about what imagery is and how you can use it for your poem? :D Okay, fine. :P Here would be my rewrite of your ...

I'm from all of them! No, just kidding. I'm from the U.S., but Americas sounds so much more interesting. xD You do realize if you were from all of them, ...

Hahaha... I would get five purple stars at this rate. Or, if you add something beyond purple, I would get three purple stars and two of the other color, plus ...

XD A big hiiiii to you too! :D

Okay, so as you already know, I don't really like this for a number of different reasons. The narrator is creeeeepy and I hate him. Usually, I am used to ...