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Re: Evil is a Matter of Shoes
Er... poke me if I don't critique this in the next couple of days. And I am sorry for this lame post, but... well... I am starting to fall asleep, ...
Jul 4, 2008 -
Re: Abortions.
This thread is about critiquing the speech and is not for debating. Please stick to the topic.
Jul 4, 2008 -
Re: I Would Like to Dream
Oh, but this is a lovely beginning! I think it would be lovely still if it were developed just a little more and you would describe the beach a little ...
Jul 3, 2008 -
Re: Forever Without Love: Chapter One (Edited)
I saw a grammar error, but I'm hoping someone else points it out, because I don't want to refind it. :P Anyway! Here are my notes. And mind you, I ...
Jul 3, 2008 -
Re: Life: In Which Mistakes Are Made.
A couple of thoughts: First of all, the first narrator either seems like a girl or an old man. This is because the voice just sounds really really bitter. And ...
Jul 3, 2008 -
Re: American English: Dialect or Language?
Um... neither. To put it in mathematical terms, US English and UK English are subspaces to the larger vector space of English. Within that subspace, there are many different dialects ...
Jul 3, 2008 -
Re: The Lone One
Right now, it's kind of weird, because although Amin is obviously blubbering and stuff, we don't really see what connection he has with Jesus, other than he knows about the ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: Head Injuries
What would probably be more realistic is if he had a head injury, somebody panicked, brought him to the ER, and then he waited FOR FIVE HOURS to see a ...
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: Ask a question here (or start a new topic!)
Hello. I was looking at the "Who's on online" and "Memberlist" and beside my name under "last visit" it always say hidden. My name don't even appear on the front ...
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: The Supreme Court Upholds the Second Amendment
LOL, that is a good debate for the debate section. ;) For your country, wherever it is, I'm sure you can deny people the right to bear arms, but not ...
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: Cockroaches and Condoms
“Here, let me get that,” he murmured, pushing the door open. The girl poked her head in and wrinkled her nose. “It’s dark.” “That’s because there’s no light turned on. ...
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: The Supreme Court Upholds the Second Amendment
They have gun laws, but you can't deny people the right to bear firearms.
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: Metal Gear Solid 5: Snake's on a Plane
...er, why is somebody reviving this obviously great piece of literature? *Locked*
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: Project Awesome... revealed!
Check the YWS Blog for details! Also, it isn't too late to add something on, if you wish to do so. Just PM me with your note and I'll add ...
Jun 29, 2008 -
Re: :P
I type in big text.
Jun 29, 2008