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Hello there! I am an evil critiquer. :) No, seriously, I am evil, but I love you and I really do hope that my comments, however biting and horrible they ...

Make sure the others know what you're going to do with it, and acknowledge them, if the time comes that you actually publish it.

Yes, it has changed. But it isn't necessarily bad... just different. When I first came here, the only chat room was a lame chat that nobody in their right mind ...

I passed my driving test and got addicted to a facebook app called Space Raiders. I, of course, blame Incan. *nods*

Haha... this is awesome.

Poetry is not simply an outpour of an emotion, and anybody who tells you otherwise is a bad writer. :P If you do want to make this more poetic, consider ...

*sigh* Well, it does suck. But, funnily enough, since it's shut down, I've actually started to write again. That's gotta be a good thing. Same here! It's actually kind of ...

Five Stages of Grief ;)

Don't worry about being a greeter yet. ^_^ Just get used to the site and have fun. The people who get chosen for greeters are generally wonderful people who love ...

1) I was not arguing, I was expressing an opinion, nothing more. 2) You are right, Sam. I just don't think it's right to get right of something just because ...

The big thing that is keeping you from making this story truly enjoyable is the fact that you want to make your character semi-retarded. I mean, otherwise it's catchy and ...

Okay! So even before I read the part with Ginsberg mentioned, I realized that you really really liked Ginsberg. Why? Because you were trying to imitate his style. I think ...

You can go to TWS to find all three parts. ;)

For critiquing free verse, consider looking at the imagery that the words create. Tell your brother what you think the imagery is saying and then he'll realize if it's on ...

[s]A pm! Ho Hum. Name: A Thesis Genre: Other Fiction Link: I am patient, and I am only sending you this because I want some brutal S&M criticism from a ...