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*hugs beautyandthefish* Eating disorders suck big time. I'm trying to get over one now... it's not your typical eating disorder because it's due to stress of school and not stress ...

Eek! Good luck with that. *hugs*

You can also have a character blank out and then, when he gets up, notice that he's all cut and he's lying on the other side of the room in ...

Actually, I think it was written in English. I attributed the mediocre style to the narrator. I love stories that you can do this with though. Stories that are very ...

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Hi kris! :D I'm just going to go through and comment really quickly on your poem, seeing as nobody else seems to want to do it... Tell the Moon to ...

This is a review of the short story, On Seeing the 100% Perfect Girl One Beautiful April Morning by Haruki Murakami. ~ In the story “On Seeing the 100% Perfect ...

Hello! This is going to be really quick because I accidentally fell asleep while attempting my thermo homework, so I think I have to get to bed at a reasonable ...

XD Dude, we're white Californian girls with the most unsouthern accent you can stomach, but Sgt Salt and I still gave you a video critique. And it kind of sounded ...

Hello Shadow Charleton! :D First of all, welcome to YWS! I'm sorry this critique is a little bit late, but it had to be uploaded. :) Sgt Salt and I ...

Hello jcloud14! :D I did a video critique for you. Basically, Sgt Salt (mi hermanita!) and I read your poems out loud, and then we commented on them. By the ...

Dude! XD Okay, so Grif, Sgt Salt, and I critiqued this. Sort of. XD Um... yeah! I rated the film 13+ because there is totally talk about sort of sexual ...

Haha... you need to visit other writing sites then. -_- Some of the critiquers are soooo mean. I mean, you think our critiquers are mean? They're nothing compared to these ...

*throws confetti everywhere* Congrats!

Hello Penguin! :D This is going to be a shortish critique because I'm tired. :P The thing that I noticed about this work was the slow pace. It took several ...