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I think it was a tie. >_< Keep on telling yourself that. ;)

XD The story goes that these two churches were positioned right across from each other on a busy street. Enjoy!

With these extra points, I demand we spend them on extra critiquing stars. *nods*

Eek. This prologue kind of sucks in a couple of different ways. For one, you don't really say anything useful. I don't know about you, but I have a 128K ...

Yeah... the voice is off. And the way he is looking for her and everything is creepy, and the voice only heightens that. What you would have to do to ...

Jacked. XD

Please do not post anything that isn't yours! That isn't allowed on YWS. *LOCKED*

Banned for having only two stars! (Review more!)

Babies are NOT sea monkeys. Sea monkeys look like THIS . See? Definitely a difference between a baby and a sea monkey.

Banned because she eats bacon.

Banned for having two different capitalization things in her name.

No, it's three bajillion million years old. XD I sort of don't like it at all, but I like your new stuff, so it's all good! There are way too ...

I am aware of that. My question is...why a penguin? Why didn't you make it about a piggy? You like piggies! Because! That story is nonfiction. There really is a ...

Banned for mixing the Goo Goo Dolls and Kanji together. XD

To critique a poem To stare at it To think about the lip I bit The broken images are very random a spool of thread a place for tandems How ...