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Re: Abortion
Please don't call anybody names or such, otherwise I will lock this thread. Murder is a premeditated plan on killing a specific human that is planned and carried out. Mean? ...
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: Not A Clue
Oh dear! This looks like a madlib! XD See? 1. Noun 2. Name 3. Noun 4. Noun. 5. Adjective. 6. Noun. 7. Noun. 8. Famous celebrity. 9. Location. 10. Impressive-sounding ...
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: The 'Shift' Key
But it does, Nate! It totally does. And I use capslock automatically. O_o It's easier for me? Otherwise, you have to press down one two keys at the same time, ...
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: Lots of "Will Review For Food" Posts; Few Reviews
Psh, you're no fun. :P
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: Pig Droppings [Closed]
Just a quick update! Finals are done, so I've started trimming down this pile a bit. I've skimmed through some, read through others, and critiqued a couple. I'm trying to ...
Dec 15, 2008 -
Re: Don't Fret
Hi kissthewitch! You asked for a critique on Pig Droppings, and I'm finally getting around to them. Yes, I know, I suck. XD Anyway, you definitely have an awesome style! ...
Dec 15, 2008 -
Re: Another Day Awake
Hello! You asked me to critique this, and finals are over, so to celebrate, I'm totally looking over your poem. And that was totally not a run-on sentence. :P To ...
Dec 15, 2008 -
Re: Carrion Death.
Tangent, mi amor! Te amo para siempre y siempre.
Dec 14, 2008 -
Re: Advanced Critiques Questions
See this:
Dec 14, 2008 -
Re: A Little Questionnaire
1) When did you join YWS? April 1, 2005. So I'm an old member. 2) Did you try out any other writing sites before you joined YWS? Yes, I did! ...
Dec 14, 2008 -
Re: Rubble and Rebel
OMG. I loved this short story! It was sooooo cute! And yeah. When I started it, I thought, "Oh no! A dog-hating person!" but then I kept on reading it ...
Dec 13, 2008 -
Re: Dealing with difficult themes in competitions
Brainstorm first! What are some things that you've doubted? Maybe you had to question your faith on spiritual matters? Whatever, just write down whatever doubt reminds you of. Then, after ...
Dec 13, 2008 -
Re: Room description
Have the characters move around the room or notice things particular about the room. And make sure you're describing interesting things. Um... yeah. Forgive me, I'm being vague. Not to ...
Dec 12, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Profile Picture Above You
:P/10 Don't kill yourself writing! That's silly, lol.
Dec 12, 2008 -
Re: December Instructor of the Month: Squall
*eats Squall* Mmmm... yummy.
Dec 12, 2008
