Snoink

Well... it's two o'clock in the morning, so anything I write will suck. Still, this is how I would approach your description: The cement was cold. It bit my through ...

XD It sounds fun! But it's likely that it won't be possible, knowing that I'm taking organic chemistry and fluid mechanics at the same time. But... well... it sounds fun. ...

Just a quick note... you can totally use the f-word in your poems and stories, so don't worry about that, and don't censor yourself, if that's the word that really ...

Eek! Nice poem. But before I start complimenting it and everything, let me introduce myself, seeing as you're new and such! :D I'm Snoink, and basically I'm on YWS waaaaaay ...

First of all, welcome to YWS! :D I'm a moderator, which means that if you need any help at all on YWS, you can always contact me and I'll do ...

Hm. Interesting poem! What I like the most is that you touch on the whole dehumanizing of a person. That is, you go from relatively simple remarks and bring it ...

Eek, this was not as good as I would normally expect from you. The part I liked was this: [quote]When I set your soul free, you flew away from me ...

Haha, this was a fun poem. ^^ That is... I liked it because of the allusions to history and the very ironical way it was written. So let's go through ...

Nice poem! :D *stars* This may just be me, but I think I would like it better without the first three stanzas. The beginning of the fourth stanza ("O Warrior, ...

*Moved to The Lounge*

Hey Goober! You asked, so I came. :) First of all, there are A LOT of grammar mistakes. I could go over them all, but I'm lazy and I don't ...

Eeeeeeek! Okay, so before I forget, I'm totally starring this. Wait a second! *scrolls up* *scrolls down* Okay, it is starred! :D Now for the critique! I clicked on this ...

I have no idea what Pern is, but ZOMG. Awesome star! :D

Oy... yes. Sometimes I wonder why people actually want to be YWS Staffers since it can be so stressful. And I am still wondering why anybody would want to be ...

*randomhugglesattack* Welcome to YWS! I happen to like drama... I like "Arms and the Man" by George Bernard Shaw, but to each her own, I guess. ;) Anyway, I'm a ...