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Hello! First of all, welcome to YWS! :D I noticed that this had no comments on it. Sad? I thought so! So I'm critiquing it. If you have any questions ...

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Ooooh, this is pretty! :D I got that the miracle was a baby and the miracle dying was the baby, dead. I'm fairly certain I'm right. But I don't think ...

So! You asked for a video critique. AND I DID IT! Here it is: So basically, I read through your poem and commented on it afterwards. You know the drill. ...

I write mainly science fiction, fantasy, and really crappy poetry. ^^ If you go through my profile, unfortunately, you'll find more of the latter. :P Mitosis is used for asexual ...

Haha... ninety-five percent of the time if people complain about a critique being too harsh, they just got their feelings hurt and they want to rant immediately, and unfortunately they ...

the other's to hell Should be "others" since it's not possessive.

Maybe you just don't like scissors? ;) I'm Grif's sister! More precisely, I'm his TWIN sister. Scary, isn't it? And Big Brother is a moderating group? ZOMG. SOMEBODY SHOULD HAVE ...

The two books that make me fall asleep are "Introduction to Fluid Mechanics" and "Introduction to Thermodynamics." For some reason, I fell asleep when I read them. However, I was ...

HA! I was homeschooled for high school. Well... sort of. Actually, I was taking junior college classes at your age because my parents didn't know what to do with me. ...

Dude! I want to read that 'socially unacceptable yet utterly brilliant' story. I love those types of stories... really. And free verse poetry is NOT cheating. Most modern poetry is ...

Okay! Instead of posting a new topic every time you try to reply to someone else's comment, go down to the page. You'll see a little box with "Quick Reply" ...

Hello, writer from New Mexico! That is such a pretty place. ^^ Anyway, what do you write?

Hehe, a froshie! :D It's nice to have another critiquer here. I used to do them quite a lot, but then I got involved with my biochemical engineering classes and... ...

Mmmmm... I personally like the old Muslim idea. Ban pictures with humans entirely. That way, there is no ideal human. Everybody is ideal. Besides, geometric shapes look more awesome than ...