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I took it down. ^^ Eek, I don't think I'm looking for any critiques on this story anymore. Or at least not on the beginning chapters. Thanks anyway for those ...

Why six? :?

Anime! Razorblade_Saint

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Or! If your backstory is really interesting and complicated, prequels may be needed. :)

That's not grammar. It's a little linguistics thing. ^^ Herb with an h is a name. Herb without an h is a special plant.

Lol, no problem! And Jared, you're lame. -45/3 = -15 You don't need a calculator for that. Just look at a clock! XD

Sometimes. ^^

Haha, for a second, I thought they were really two variables! :o First off, I don't know what you mean by this: 3t + 5 --------- = -5 8 Can ...

Ha, okay, we can take this to The Lounge. ^^ In my time, the heartthrobs were Leonardo DiCaprio (Titanic) and the Backstreet Boys. I think young girls are just boy ...

Equilateral triangles are isosceles though... just not the other way around. O_o

Okay, this is TOTALLY going to an MTV critique (sorry about that!) but here we go! I though the ending was really weak. And this is mostly because you have ...

*Locked* Please read the story here.

XD I think I've done several critiques which basically start comparing characters to those in 30 Rock. For some reason, those authors never ask for more critiques from me.... But ...