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Re: Mirror
Or! Or! You can do something more awesome! I mean, yeah, that's true, the French doesn't really have to do with anything in the title... but the poem isn't spectacular ...
May 14, 2009 -
Re: The Sun's Frozen Tears; Ch. 1
Okay, first of all, thank you for your patience! It is much appreciated! :D So I gave you a video critique. And, unfortunately, it's not really that great. -_- I ...
May 14, 2009 -
Re: Beast
No problem. ^^ I know at least three people who absolutely couldn't get through the beginning of this story because of various reasons (mostly because of the dullness) but they ...
May 11, 2009 -
Re: Am I the only one on YWS when i have homework?
>.>
May 11, 2009 -
Re: A Lesson in Dying
The "f" is capitalized to deliberately make you stumble on the word.
May 11, 2009 -
Re: I have Four Scars
Aww... this is a weirdly sweet poem! The first: jagged, raised a deep puncture. The second: twins paralleled across pale flesh. You described the physical attributes of them, but I ...
May 11, 2009 -
Re: Beast
The reason why people probably didn't finish it is this: It is dull and self-absorbed. I tried to read it, but I really wanted to stop after reading this much: ...
May 11, 2009 -
Re: Ask a question here (or start a new topic!)
Dude! We love you to greet, even if you're not a greeter! :D Also, we love you to critique, even if you're not an instructor. The more you participate in ...
May 10, 2009 -
Re: How long can a character remain nameless?
Haha... I had a character who was known as "the freak" throughout the story. It was awesome. If you have a lot of characters call her different names so that ...
May 10, 2009 -
Re: BBB!
WRITE.
May 9, 2009 -
Re: The YWS Zombie Attack
The sad part might be how right you were about me reading it because I saw the word 'zombie.' xD Ha! Same.
May 7, 2009 -
Re: Factorization, Algebra II
Okay! Since writing out long hand hurts... substitute y+z with p So: y+z=p You get: (x+ p)*(px+ yz)- xyz Now try to solve it.
May 7, 2009 -
Re: June!
Are you kidding? She's a horrible, horrible person. :P
May 5, 2009 -
Re: East of the Sun and West of the Moon
Psh, you know you want it. :P And! Now to write really crappy stories, since y'know how much practice we've had... XD Also, feel free to do whatever you want ...
May 3, 2009 -
Re: East of the Sun and West of the Moon
CHARACTERS: Rhiannon and Luke SUMMARY: it's like a spin off of Twilight (I think) EXCEPT the girl (Rhiannon) is going to be from a uberly military family and the guy ...
May 3, 2009
