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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Mirror

    Or! Or! You can do something more awesome! I mean, yeah, that's true, the French doesn't really have to do with anything in the title... but the poem isn't spectacular ...

    May 14, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Sun's Frozen Tears; Ch. 1

    Okay, first of all, thank you for your patience! It is much appreciated! :D So I gave you a video critique. And, unfortunately, it's not really that great. -_- I ...

    May 14, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Beast

    No problem. ^^ I know at least three people who absolutely couldn't get through the beginning of this story because of various reasons (mostly because of the dullness) but they ...

    May 11, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Am I the only one on YWS when i have homework?

    >.>

    May 11, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A Lesson in Dying

    The "f" is capitalized to deliberately make you stumble on the word.

    May 11, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I have Four Scars

    Aww... this is a weirdly sweet poem! The first: jagged, raised a deep puncture. The second: twins paralleled across pale flesh. You described the physical attributes of them, but I ...

    May 11, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Beast

    The reason why people probably didn't finish it is this: It is dull and self-absorbed. I tried to read it, but I really wanted to stop after reading this much: ...

    May 11, 2009
  • Questions and Answers Re: Ask a question here (or start a new topic!)

    Dude! We love you to greet, even if you're not a greeter! :D Also, we love you to critique, even if you're not an instructor. The more you participate in ...

    May 10, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: How long can a character remain nameless?

    Haha... I had a character who was known as "the freak" throughout the story. It was awesome. If you have a lot of characters call her different names so that ...

    May 10, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: BBB!

    WRITE.

    May 9, 2009
  • Information Desk Archive Re: The YWS Zombie Attack

    The sad part might be how right you were about me reading it because I saw the word 'zombie.' xD Ha! Same.

    May 7, 2009
  • Homework Help Re: Factorization, Algebra II

    Okay! Since writing out long hand hurts... substitute y+z with p So: y+z=p You get: (x+ p)*(px+ yz)- xyz Now try to solve it.

    May 7, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: June!

    Are you kidding? She's a horrible, horrible person. :P

    May 5, 2009
  • Archive Re: East of the Sun and West of the Moon

    Psh, you know you want it. :P And! Now to write really crappy stories, since y'know how much practice we've had... XD Also, feel free to do whatever you want ...

    May 3, 2009
  • Archive Re: East of the Sun and West of the Moon

    CHARACTERS: Rhiannon and Luke SUMMARY: it's like a spin off of Twilight (I think) EXCEPT the girl (Rhiannon) is going to be from a uberly military family and the guy ...

    May 3, 2009


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