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Mwha! Incoherent is the best kind of coherence. Unless, of course, the grammar is horrible and the writing makes my eyes bleed. But I doubt that is the case! ;D ...

Wow! That's a lot of words! Reader or not, I'm afraid to say that you've out-written a lot of YWS with that sheer amount of word count, and that is ...

Oooh! Fun stories. I see you're a gamer. ;) I'm not.. but yeah. Isn't oblivion the one with the cake? *flails* And I think Assassin's Creed is the one with ...

Hahaha, your story sounds epic. It must be really fun to write. ^_^ Is your friend on YWS? You should totally drag her on, if not.

*snugs Hawkie* 1. A few constructive comments will work. As you go around YWS, try to find good critiques and such that are really helpful. Especially if they help you ...

Chicken!

And this is more reason why Evi is awesome!

I had to take linear algebra. XD It really depends on what major you're going into. I had to take partial differential equations and mathematical modeling and several math programming ...

*Moved to Other Poetry*

Hmmm... there seem to be a couple of inconsistencies here. Unless this guy is eight or ten feet tall, it's very unlikely that the child is eye line with the ...

Zomg! You're from California too! *snugs* Are you norcal or socal? :P

Nope, sorry.

...and Merry Christmas! askjfgdkg! So what are you getting me for your birthday? :D

3/10 I didn't want to finish reading the first sentence. It didn't make sense. You start the sentence off by saying that he raises his hand? Um... elementary school much? ...

Writers groups are fantastic. Mine usually consists of us gossiping about boys and eating chocolate. And sometimes there's discussion about writing. But really! You should just go. They'll probably lo