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Hello! First of all, welcome to YWS! This story reminds me a lot of my diary entry for September 11, 2001, so you definitely get credit for that. :) It ...

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Today is Jennafina's birthday! And I think she's FINALLY home (she was gone for a while), which means that she can totally read this. XD Happy birthday, sweetie-cake! :D

Hello BBB! I used to be really into gemology, so this will be a weird critique that may be on a tangent sometimes. But that might be a good thing! ...

First of all, hello! Second of all, critique! :D I remember...

I've heard "hook us up" like Exialac... never heard of "boot" though. So not in Northern California.

I'm going to be honest and say that when I first looked at this I couldn't believe it was a story that someone who's *checks* 21 would write, then the ...

Now that's the sort of stuff they should be teaching us in Science, not the Periodic table! But! But! First you need to know about the periodic table in order ...

Hello! First of all, welcome to YWS! It's great to have you here. If you need any help, feel free to bug me about anything, really. This is going to ...

What if you upload it here? Like, try to upload it on YWS really quick and then download it.

Wait, the file won't open from the flash disk? Can you see the file there/

Make sure you have a finished product when you go to the publishers. Otherwise, they'll reject you without a thought. Remember to read your work thoroughly before you submit it. ...

What confuses you, specifically? :D Maybe I can help.

Haha, I pulled off a whole novel without giving two of the characters names. It was awesome. If I can do it, you can do it. One of the things ...

Hehe, the critique is damning, but at least it points out plotholes and other consistencies that can be looked at in subsequent drafts, so it can be helpful. Just make ...