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Re: Hello!
Well, if you've got any questions, feel free to bug Snoink to no end- err, I mean, feel free to PM me! :D Have a jolly day! :) ~Meep(: I ...
Jul 1, 2009 -
Re: Death's Sunset
Is, lead, come, can, say, come, have, is, descends, line, wait, join, is, say, can, predict, say, open, look. What do those words have in common? They are you action ...
Jun 25, 2009 -
Re: Daddy Loves You
Nice to see you writing again! :D I shall be concise: I didn't like the beginning, liked the middle, and thought the ending didn't resolve anything. For the beginning, it ...
Jun 24, 2009 -
Re: Tell me why
Eek! Your friend is kind of an awesome writer. But we don't allow people to post things for their friends? It's a whole permission/copyright thingy... trust me. :) Tell her ...
Jun 24, 2009 -
Re: If you could change your username...
pixyunicorndush45425472545724254212475 or! Lionel Train Set or! IAMAWESOMERTHANYOUMWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAaquickbrownfoxjumpsoverthelazydog123456789?!?!?!?!
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: For BBB: A discussion of storytelling and conflict in poetry
So. Question: which do you prefer in a poem? Meaning or language/imagery. Either or, please. Neither. I'll throw away any poem if it only has meaning or if it only ...
Jun 19, 2009 -
Re: The Writer, by Richard Wilbur
I found an interesting poem that pertains to young writers! What do you guys think? The Writer by Richard Wilbur In her room at the prow of the house Where ...
Jun 18, 2009 -
Re: A little editorial on the gun
*Moved to Non-Fiction*
Jun 16, 2009 -
Re: Ban The User Above You! [4]
Banned for having less than five percent of her total posts be critiques!
Jun 16, 2009 -
Re: Narcissism
Haha, my signature is soooo old. It has a heart over the i, though the heart has turned into more of a pig hoof. I do the same thing as ...
Jun 16, 2009 -
Re: What book are you currently reading?
Atlas Shrugged, by Ayn Rand
Jun 16, 2009 -
Re: Villain Rewrite: More Daunting Than the Villain Himself
Make him love something.
Jun 16, 2009 -
Re: Saved
So you've got a lot of excellent critiques for this, which is good! I'm going to link to you a couple of writing tutorials that I thought of when I ...
Jun 16, 2009 -
Re: [Deleted]
At the moment the words came out of my father’s mouth, I felt a hard, sharp pain in my stomach This part of the sentence was all right. It has ...
Jun 16, 2009 -
Re: another newbie (:
True story! Once, I was walking and I saw a lost dog sign that said "Chloe." Not knowing how to pronounce the dog's name, but wanting to help, I wandered ...
Jun 16, 2009
