Snoink

First of all, welcome to YWS! I'm Snoink. I also happen to be considered one of the tougher critics to please on YWS, but enough with that! So basically, what ...

TAKE OUT THE RHYMING! Nah, just kidding. ;) Actually, it's really not that bad. I like how you used the doll to represent girls in general. Plus, the rhyming scheme ...

Hi Alec! :D I saw this poem and I figured I would review it. Normally, I'm considered one of the tougher critics in YWS, but I do want to help ...

The squirts don’t know Daddy’s here. They scream and thrash calling out (incessantly) Daddy’s name -- on a full bus no less -- and kick my seat so that my ...

*Moved to Writing Tips*

The more you critique (and the better your critiques are!), the more willing people are to review your work. Also, if you do critique and ask people to critique your ...

Big announcement??? Concerning YWS??? ZOMG!

Hehe... some sex actually makes no sense in the evolutionary sense anyway. For example, why would a peacock have all those clumsy feathers and attract females with it, and why ...

10:39:10 AM Conrad: hihi 10:39:17 AM Snoinky

Commercialisation of society, eh? Sounds acceptably academic and intelligent. Which is why I doubt it so much :P -Stella x Say what you will! I can handle it. *weeps*

Six. A. M. Oh Lord. I think I'll be missing it. One more show without a penguin trill, mourn. :P *Hearts* Le Penguin. Awww... but! Penguin trills!

Looks like someone copied the times I posted without attribution and without updating ;) The original before I cleared it up: New Zealand: 8 am, Monday, July 13 Australia & ...

I know! So exciting! Another radio show! Anyway, my sibs and I will be hosting another radio show this Sunday, same time and place as the other radio show. This ...

This poem is almost five years old. ^^ *Locked*

I have to say I think some people on this site are far too anal, I mean I thought I was anal, damn. I love your style, the imagery is ...