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Dun dun dunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn! See the sequel in the literary forums!

Well, Nate, obviously the answer is to pay us. I demand a 42% raise from my current salary, plus a moving bonus so I can be closer to the office. ...

Except for the fact that the new server conveniently kills YWS for about ten minutes near midnight when I should, ideally, be in bed. :P

Yay for SPEW! Too bad it doesn't exist...

I would personally weep emo tears of pain and sadness and write bad poetry to commemorate the passing of this historical icon. Or, y'know, do homework instead. :P

Actually, Grif, a video with better quality can be found here:

I want something dark, yet sets the style of the universe my novel has. What sort of style does your universe have? :)

If I saw this beginning, I would put it down and not want to read it. It's simply too confusing and doesn't have enough conflict in it. It's like, you ...

So for now, think of your points as a reward for reviewing. And start accumulating them because in a month or so, you'll be glad you did so. :O

lol is right. *Moved to Randomness*

Hahaha, yes. In general, it's a bad thing to have to explain a story to somebody. :P It totally ruins the punchline. And, it's not the idea really, just the ...

It kind of looks like you're saying the same thing over and over again, which isn't that good. And I think it's because you want to say so much, but ...

Hello, lilylynn, and welcome to YWS! :D The biggest thing I can see with this poem is that it's not really... aesthetically pleasing. That is, the quotes and the capitalization ...

Hello Addawen! :D First of all, when I read stories, I want to be sucked into the action at once. And that's mostly because I love to be grabbed and ...

Haha, that was cute! Ideas for chapter two... maybe you could make other people find out about the rocket? That way, it gets a little more complicated. First, maybe his ...