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  • Writing Tips Re: Keeping Background Information Interesting

    How do I keep from infodumping? My main character is telling some minor characters some background information, and I don’t know how to break it up. This information is necessary ...

    Oct 18, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: discussion on Twilight (and Eragon)

    Calm down, everyone. I think the reference to the website was just a joke, so you shouldn't take it too seriously. :)

    Oct 16, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Writing As A Career

    I don't get the point of majoring in English to be a writer. If you want to write, write--there's no need to pay thousands of dollars a year for classes. ...

    Oct 11, 2009
  • Randomosity Re: Bartemius Wins Peace Prize

    YAY! YWS represents, yo!

    Oct 9, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: And We Were

    Actually, it reminds me of The Wall in Washington D.C. There's a traveling one and it came to our town once. I remember when Mom went to look at it, ...

    Oct 9, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: Halp! D:

    Join my usergroup for character development! :D No, seriously, don't worry too much about it! You're probably just doing the first draft. Write the thing first (no, seriously, just write!) ...

    Oct 9, 2009
  • Randomosity Re: Obama Applauds YWS in Community Service Speech

    Why is everybody talking in spoilers?

    Oct 8, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: WHIP THEM INSTRUCTORS (and get points!)

    How to defeat the plot bunnies? That aught to get them thinking.... LOL. Be more specific! What particular elements of plot are you struggling with? I.E. do your plot bunnies ...

    Oct 8, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: WHIP THEM INSTRUCTORS (and get points!)

    I'm not sure I can stump any intructors, but you've seen me ranting about character development before. You gave me some great advice on my blog and I've love to ...

    Oct 7, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: WHIP THEM INSTRUCTORS (and get points!)

    Okay. So you regular members don't know about this, but basically, the moderators of YWS basically beat our instructors (the people in purple!) regularly. It actually looks something like this: ...

    Oct 7, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Shrive: Prologue

    Intriguing! I don't really have any comments, per say, but only because it's intriguing and I'm wondering what is going to happen next. Which is good! Questions I'm wondering: Who ...

    Oct 5, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Towers

    Dreamer! :P This is boring! The characterization is flat. You have Crystal, the class, teacher, and your narrator, and I can safely say that I have no idea why I ...

    Oct 5, 2009
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Review Ratios and You (reform!)

    Bek is right. The 3:1 ratio would count for everyone. However, only reviews and literary works since October 1st would be taken into account for the purpose of posting new ...

    Oct 5, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The War Wind

    Hey pudding! :D There were a lot of good things about this poem! For one, you actually talked about something real that we could visualize. So that gives us a ...

    Oct 4, 2009
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: SPEW

    Well, what is our hypothesis?

    Oct 4, 2009


You are beautiful because you let yourself feel, and that is a brave thing indeed.
— Shinji Moon