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It doesn't quite sound like the dancer in the story. I mean, you have a strict format to work with, but you can tweak it so that the story is ...

OMG! OMG! You're back! :D I've missed you and your pretty poetry! Except this wasn't pretty... very gritty. I pretty much loved it and its dirtiness. Lovely stuff! A grammar ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! The other guys were right! There were a lot of grammatical errors, but they can be easily fixed. Just take the time and fix it. ...

Hahaha... you didn't mention the TOP-SECRET ADVANCE OF THE GREETERS IN QINGHAI. Oops. I mean...

DUN DUN DUN! Cliffhanger! Get on it, man! :P

I think this is the poem that you've been wanting to write for all these years. It's lovely. :)

But... does it coil... like a snake? ;) But yeah... I totally know what's going to happen next (and yes, the spoilers are spoilers for a reason... they will curdle ...

LOL! Still trying to argue with your reviewers, eh? When will you ever learn? ;) So... this isn't going to be a review. Really. Because it's late and stuff and ...

I was wondering when you would post this! Just a couple of comments before the actual critique: -> Try not to use the passive voice. When you say, "my fingers ...

Generally, poetry is written to dig further into a subject rather than to gloss over it. ;) A cliche that comes to mind is, "Write what you know." As you ...

There should be an "Inside the Mod Forum" section. Which includes the discussions we've had about zombifying all our members.

This is more of a summary of the conflict rather than the story. Or maybe it's a prologue... I can't tell. Flesh it out and make it sparkle. It'll be ...

Okay! So I've listened to this a little too much, and I still adore this album. However! I've changed my mind on one of the songs. "Quiet As a Mouse" ...

Hey Rosey! I heard a lot about this piece, so I figured I would drop by and comment. :P First of all, flash fiction is just that... you are supposed ...

LOL! I thought about putting in your suggestion, but that's something I used to do... I've stopped doing that, just because it kind of stalls the action and I end ...