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Awww, so sweet! A couple of things... You say the boyfriend and the girlfriend way too much, I think. I would rather use their real names. :P Still... one thing ...

Oh gosh... I can totally relate. I hate posting my new work up here, lol. Especially stories! Poems are one thing... stories are like soul-dumps for me and just the ...

First, gimmicky writing doesn't mean it's good writing. In fact, most of the time, it's bad writing. In this case, it's bad writing. Get rid of the bad grammar in ...

Hey Nutty! Two things! First of all, I want to see more action when she spills hot coffee all over herself. Why? Because that sort of stuff totally wakes you ...

Haha, this was pretty cute! I would have it more centered on the girl... after all, this is her dream, so why would she dream about someone watching her? I ...

Omg! Horses! They're like... the cutest things ever. I think I had an argument on YWS once... which one is better, horses or boys? And horses absolutely won (though the ...

Turning water to win? How is this not amazing??? And silly Bolt, you need to read the bible more, especially the books in the New Testament if you're going to ...

Okay! This mostly amuses me, but when I look at my profile statistics, it doesn't tell me my most active forum. I am pretty sure that's because my mere profile ...

Hey Commas! It's really late, so I should probably go to bed, but I figured I would comment on your poem first! To start, stylistically, it's really stop-and-go. You flit ...

Okay, this is just going to be a quick review, but here we go! The main thing I thought was a little weird was that you kept saying you would ...

Jean Luc Picard.

Ohmigosh! This poem made me squeamish, lol. Needles, in general, suck. Like... oh gosh. I have to spend half my time holding my eyes when watching House. It's really pathetic. ...

WoW is evil. Beware. Agreed. Plus, it costs money. Sanctum is much cooler. XD

Give it to me because I love you! Or... um... can use those points to take over the world!

Yep... it was totally smaur's fault... >.> I didn't even notice it, lol.