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Hehe! What a twisted story! I like it. What is this a fanfiction of? :) Anyway, I have one grammatical comment, but it should be easy, so no worries! Whenever ...

Hey emoticon! Welcome to YWS! :D There is a difference between poetry and brain dumps! Brain dumps belong to journals or blogs... places that are personal and not up for ...

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Okay, so this is the nit-picky review! The better review, full of lovely commentary on the actual story, is on TWS (since we need to get that place up and ...

Only because of you... we love you Nate!

Thanks, Nate, for all your help!

It all started when our protagonist, the freak, woke up in a moor. It was the second time it had happened. Feeling overwhelmingly relieved, the freak punched a butterknife, thinking ...

Hey Words! Okay, this is going to be a really general review, so yay? For the first two stanzas, you have a really hopeful tone that makes it sound like ...

Eek! I really liked this for the most part. It reminded me of William Carlos Williams's "Red Wheelbarrow", which is always a good thing! My main problem was it wasn't ...

Okay! Winston is awesome, but the dog looks really weird to me. I may be biased because I have a german shepherd at home, but here we go! The lower ...

Um. Okay. So, speaking as a biochemical engineering student who has researched this topic for a research paper, as of today, designer children are almost impossible to produce. There's no ...