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Hehehe, you're an awesome artist, did anyone ever tell you that? ;D Just a couple of things! His lips look super cracked, yet at they don't looked cracked in the ...

Hey Sanareth! :D Well, this is a morbid poem! I'm guessing the he in the poem is dead now... and I am guessing the narrator is a she, so those ...

Hello ozasatya, and welcome to YWS! :D Debate competitions can be rough... it's true! Part of me likes the first part of the poem, because it's obviously after a crummy ...

Eek! You must be incredibly creative to dabble in all genres! That's awesome! What particular genre is your favorite? Oh! Also, if you need any help, just bug me or ...

Pudding! Soooooo many spelling mistakes! It's quite ridiculous... but incredibly fixable! Run it through a spell checker and fix them all! :D Anyway, fantastic dream! Really! The main thing that ...

Okay! So I don't get this. She is underage, cutting herself, turning to drugs. The child, for some reason, isn't a miscarriage. And, at the hospital... they allow her to ...

Hi Tiger! So, I could definitely tell that the writing style was new to you! But at the same, I didn't quite like the style or the content of the ...

Haha, I just found this! Daniel is a lovely name for a boy... I'm glad you used it. :) And vet's assistant! That's awesome. If you need any help for ...

So, you may not know this but Nate , our admin for YWS, is a champion ice skater. Because of his skills, he decided to try out for the winter ...

Clever! I quite liked this. :) A star for you! The main problem is that the words don't run together smoothly. It's a little hard to describe, so just read ...

Hey wati! I know that you said not to shatter this, so I'm not going point by point on this, but I would like to point out some things that ...

Hey Ego! I've seen you critiquing on YWS, so I figured I would drop by! :D I didn't like the first two stanzas at all. They were really boring. It's ...

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I could hardly breathe because he was chocking me with my own clothes.