Snoink

One of the things that I think is missing is us knowing whether he's dead in the first place. If he is dead, then lose the "followed" in "Behind her, ...

Banned for wearing bunny slippers on YWS! No shoes, no service. Duh.

LOL! You kids are crazy! And of course, it amuses me that captain.classy gives a full review... of course! YWS has trained you well. :P One thing: She praised my ...

Hello! I'm glad to see YWS is better to navigate this year. We did a recent remodeling of it, so it looks completely new. :) Hopefully you'll be able to ...

Selfish thread? I'm in! :D The Completely Evil Radio Show Best. Prank. Ever. But that was kind of a co-write... I mean, I made most of it, but not all ...

Hi Katie! Figured I would critique this one. :) Anyway, for the most part, I really liked the poem. Some of it was a little strange, of course. For instance, ...

Next time, just ask a mod to move the thread for you. ;) I moved your original thread to the Dramatic Poetry forum. *Locked*

Did somebody say brutal? :D I'm confused! It would be better to describe who this witch is, what role she played in the story, and why she would kill the ...

Hey Tayla! One thing that kind of confused me... which concentration camp is this? I mean, I'm assuming it's a Nazi-run concentration camp since that's what's typical, but I'm not ...

Hey Tayla! A story? Eek! All right. I'll review it... I'm always up for an excellent short story! But you should review some pieces too. That way, you'll make people ...

Hey Selene! This is what I would call a music video poem. You know how some music videos go from image to image without any congruity? This is what this ...

Hey Joy! I did tell you I would look at your stuff? No? ;) I want to point out something to you! Look how many adjectives you have! A satisfied ...

Hey, Joy! :D Welcome to YWS! Poetry and short stories? Interesting! I'll head right over and see if I can give you any useful critiques. :) Also? You should be ...

Mwhahaha! We shall do evil things together! Actually, at the moment, it's more of a scavenger hunt/writing prompts place. But it's 100% evil, so no worries! :)

Haha, you guys are crazy! Welcome to YWS! I'm a Snoink. :)