Snoink

Whoa, calm down. If you want reviews, the best thing to do is to review other people. You'll get noticed a LOT easier. :P Anyway... there are a lot of ...

Red pens belong to the reviewers, silly! :P

Hi Mentalist! :) I just wanted to ask a bunch of questions which will hopefully be helpful. First of all, I kind of think it's strange. He's a pick pocket ...

Haha, weird! I've never heard of YWO! However, I am really slow on joining writing sites or knowing anything about them, really... I only joined YWS because a TYWC member ...

Banned for being adorable!

I think the badges thing is a cool idea, but the ones you posted, Nate, looked very clutter-ish. If you did go through with this, I would suggest something like ...

Lovely poem! :) I like most of it, but there was a line that I didn't quite enjoy... Just a handful of sand to thrust The way you're using this ...

LOL! Clever way to satirize it all... I find it especially humorous that your reviewers generally didn't catch the satire. ;) My main problem was this: (an inappropriately repugnant word ...

Half-werewolf? I thought you were either full werewolf or nothing. :P Nah, it's your story. Some of it was a bit strange... the parts you described, it sounded like the ...

Hey Quippie! First of all, the poem's text is hideously small. I can barely read it. I don't know if this is your attention (maybe you don't want me to ...

Of course not. If you did that, I would be disappointed. Subtlety is key here. But I would like to see more of the girl's character than her just giggling ...

Stop telling us what it won't do and focus on what it does do! Focusing on what it doesn't do doesn't give us a clear picture of the storm, how ...

The good thing is, this thing is short and sweet! Unfortunately, when we read this poem, we finish it and think, "Okay... now what?" You don't really give us enough ...

Hey Corwin! Welcome to YWS! If you need any help, just PM me. I'm terrible at reviewing lyrics, sadly. I am pretty much tone deaf. But I'm glad to have ...

PSH. John Mayer will never be as awesome as John Lennon. Will's got it right... listen to him! :D Anyway, welcome to YWS! I'm Snoink. Do you, by chance, happen ...