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I really think this poem belongs more in the dramatic poetry than the lyric poetry. :P However, you should note that as long as we each give a critique to ...

Hey July! First of all, welcome to YWS! If you need any help with ANYTHING, feel free to bug me. :) Your poem was lovely! I love the description of ...

*Moved to Lyrics*

Hey Corwin! I think Empress is right on the money when she says that this seems to be more of lyrics than lyric poetry, so if you want me to ...

This wasn't as exciting as I thought it would be D: I was hoping for a toe race. Psh, this is the internet. No room for running!

Hey Caged Heart! :D Welcome to YWS (since I am pretty sure I haven't welcomed you yet)! Your poem was a little odd! At first it was sweet, and then ...

Hey Warrior Princess! :D I actually really liked this poem! It was rhyming and in a weird way, which totally reminded me of Alice In Wonderland ... always a good ...

Unorthodox comments for the win! XD I kind of agree with everybody here. I like your other poem a million times more, but this one is okay and I want ...

I actually really like that line that empress pointed out. I think it's clever. So definitely keep that! :) First! A little question: I'm walking for miles on my broken ...

Hey, CJ... welcome to YWS! :D Oy, hopefully this isn't autobiographical! Poetry takes a bit to learn. My best advice is to read lots of poetry, figure out what you ...

Hey Angel, welcome to YWS! Hope to see you on later. :) My favorite verse is this, actually: Beyond a mini-skirt lies ecstasy and divine galore; the devil laughs with ...

Haha, fun idea!

Like "The Giver" by Lois Lowry?

People with no reviews get five orange stars now. ;)

I like to be twisted and turned. Anything that doesn't follow the cliche delights me.