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Oooh! I really liked this poem! Very quirky and lovely... very nice. Definitely a star for you! Just a couple of grammar mistakes: Looks like its a pretty cloudy day.

Eek! The first three lines are full of awesome. I love the way how you make happiness dance... it's very pretty! So a star for you! :D The main thing ...

Awesome layout! :D The poem needs trimming though! There are a lot of useless words that are mostly there to fill in the staircase layout--which is awesome! I love the ...

Hehe, but jealousy does often have a role with bullying. That's why I bullied my little sister when I was younger! ;) Though... it wasn't just because of that. Usually, ...

Haha! Nice use of irony then. :D Sometimes on YWS, people will make these poems and seriously make them like this and expect us readers to think they're the bestest ...

Hola! This, to me, seemed like a watered-down version of a psalm, which is really sad! I love the psalms... it was a combination of psalms, Shel Silverstein, and Pablo ...

Hey Rockstar! :D This poem seems less like lyric poetry and more like lyrics since you have a repeated section over again. Just so you know! If you want me ...

But, but! Science is awesome! :P This poem reminded me of Walt Whitman's When I Heard the Learn'd Astronomer ... which is a good thing! I like that poem. However, ...

I never had it. XD

Hey midnight! Welcome to YWS! :D Nice poem! I like the beginning especially. One thing I noticed though.... the first part seemed to be addressed to the reader, which I ...

Eek! Cute poem!

*Moved to Fanfiction*

Hi slandie! Welcome to YWS! :D I like the musings of love in the beginning. But... well... there are a lot of "me" "I" "my" in this poem. A lot. ...

O.O *feels the need to go review more* That's the spirit! :D

I thought it was just talking about how a dying atheist was thinking that the end of his life was coming and there would be no hope for the future... ...