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Congratulations! :D

Aww, it sounds like you got a bad review! *snugs* Well, first of all, this doesn't seem like narrative poetry at all. Narrative poetry is all about telling a story, ...

MWHAHHAHAHHAA. BEG SOME MORE! Nah, just kidding. I love horses too. Just signed up for more lessons today actually... I will learn how to canter eventually! :D Welcome to YWS! ...

Haha, yay for two pillows! We are very much alike... well, at least for that. And comedy is awesome. Do you happen to write about sock puppets? (Also, welcome!)

Awww... you capitalized all you're "I's" and put in all your apostrophes. No offense but... well... in my mind, you're an awesome newbie. :D Welcome to YWS! If you need ...

Ooh, I liked this! Reminds me of folksy music... got to love that stuff! Very lyrical. :) However... why would your guy (in the Mercedes Benz) recommend Wal-Mart to the ...

Hey, Pacific! :D I like the poem for the most part... it was quite quirky and fun! So definitely a star for you! I do wonder about the last line ...

Hey anima! :D First, some nitpicks: As the sun regains it's majesty, I open my eyes to it's glory.

Hey Vera! What an awful relationship! She's with him... why? I don't know. While I was reading the poem, I kept thinking, "Okay, so we're going to find out what ...

Hey Random! Sorry about your friend. That's never cool. :( For your poem, trying making it a tad more specific. Right now, it sounds like somebody stabbed in her in ...

Hmmm... I don't think this member is with us anymore? In any case, I'm locking this. ^_^

Hey Spiral! :D What this poem needs is some personality! We have a bunch of gloomy images, some laments about broken hearts... but nothing about you personally. And what can ...

Ooh! I like this poem! :D One thing that you may consider changing is the structure. At the end of every stanza, you have it break off in an ellipse, ...

Hey Awakening! :D First of all, check for spelling errors... there are a couple in here! Run it through a spell check and you'll see. ;) So! I liked you ...

I don't read that much anymore (yeah, I suck... I blame school and an engineering major) but what about people that just enjoy being mean for the thrill of it? ...