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Haha, yay for old works! It's all right, especially for a twelve-year-old! If you wanted to revise this and make it better, consider taking out some of the adjectives and ...

Haha, don't worry! You'll learn how to write well soon enough. Just be patient. And OMG. Ice cream! It's the most awesome thing ever. What's your favorite flavor(s)?

Aw, what a cute poem! It kind of reminds me of the Hallmark Cards (you know, the romantic ones) or perhaps a poem that would belong to an illustrated children's ...

Hey zephyrpig! Awesome username, by the way. ;) (Me? Like pigs? NEVER.) I thought this was cool because I definitely got that sort of wicked witch feeling from it... and ...

Hey chanchan! :D This is funny! I giggled through it... just when he starts to sound evil, he acts weird and spastic. And come on, that's pretty hilarious! :D Just ...

June needs 43 more critiques until she can get the fifth red star. ;)

Just a quick thing: "The great tubas of pain, wrapped around her stomach, the blood, the blood, the stall floor was slippery with it." Tubas? It just seems a bit ...

Hello! I want to share a poem for you that is totally a Black History poem! Maybe it'll spark your imagination to see great poetry in action! Ballad Of Birmingham ...

Thanks!

You are horrendously evil, Jacke. (And I second that motion about posting something new.)

Don't have too much fun! :D

A pig! :D

I think you should just start with the first chapter. :) I think, in general, most writers think they need a prologue to introduce things that their readers "might miss" ...

LOL! Don't worry about writing "unique" things. Write what you love, always, always, always! :D

So, I'm basically becoming more and more average everyday. Well, thanks for that. You're so mean!