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Prokayote is absolutely right. I would hate it if some of my pieces from when I was 16 were brought up again. :)

Hey lonewolf! Welcome to YWS! :D Your script is a little short and rather disconnected, which may explain why your filming was interrupted constantly! Try lengthening it up and giving ...

Haha! And apparently, when I had written this, I had forgotten that it was almost Valentine's Day. AND REALLY. What is more romantic than romantic fiction? :D

Hi Mrs. Chaos! Welcome to YWS! :D So You started on a pretty interesting note! They were obviously very uncomfortable with each other, and that sort of conflict is pretty ...

Hahaha! What an interesting story! Definitely didn't suspect that ending! Now, one thing... the ending is a little confusing because it doesn't really make it clear who he's fantasizing over... ...

Hey emmylou! :D So! You started off with a lot of action, which was really really cool! I mean, come on... somebody getting branded? How much more awesome could you ...

Hey snickerdooly! Your name is sooooo cute. I mean it! :D Okay, now on with the review! What I kept on wondering when I read this piece was, "Why would ...

Okay. So I was talking with one of my writerly friends in real life and I mentioned that I was working on YWS, and she said, "Oh, that kiddy site." ...

Those people want to clutter up your PM box, of course! But yeah. If they feel that guilty to spend time to send you a PM about it, why not ...

No posting the same topic in two forums! I'll move the other one to the appropriate spot. This is locked. :)

Emily! I never knew you wrote poetry. :D Okay! So your poem... at first I thought you were talking about what would happen in real life and stuff, but then ...

Still, your eyes are very pretty and your face beams. You're a lovely girl. :)

Right now, if I had a friend who was going to commit suicide, I could call the cops and the cops could come and stop that friend and give my ...

Okay! So now that it's in the right place, you have to think... why would somebody fall in love with another person in the first place? Don't think in terms ...

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