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Note to mods: Capital letters are fully intended in this title. ^_^ Anyway, these are the first three chapters of FREAK. Besides any other comments you have, there is one ...

Yay! Math! :D I would say to geek it out even more. As one of the resident math tutors of YWS (yes, I know, I'm pathetic) I would love to ...

Psh, killing characters is fun! But killing main characters? Laaaaaaaaaame! It's like, "Oh, hmmmmm... let me see, I'm not quite sure how to end this properly, so instead of attempting ...

Speaking of ee cummings! My mom and I adore this quote: i thank You God for most this amazing day: for the leaping greenly spirits of trees and a blue ...

As this is a piece about a Christian's belief on God, I think the biggest thing that is missing from this essay is the actual text from the bible. There ...

I'm game! :D

Show, don't tell. This is boring. On a similar note, although poetry is about exposing truths of our lives, reading poetry that tells us this or that is really not ...

Cold fusion is impossible because it violates several laws of thermodynamics. Just sayin'. ;)

You might want to start up a blog! YWS has a very big blog system that can get you comments without the criticism that you would otherwise get when posting ...

Put action in it! For example, I don't like, "The elderly man stood wizened with age, his white hair laid back as he looked up to me." Too many descriptions ...

A brilliant story like this needed to be continued, of course. ;)

Actually... maybe you dwell too much on it! Heavy gunfire from both sides was now echoing around us. We cowered on the floor in the back of the van, covering ...

It was CottonSprout that gave it away, actually. He had no period after his sentence. At least Trodo put an exclamation point. XD Haha. If this is any hint as ...

And please note that the $19.95 only applies to the US members. Right now, the technology we are talking about would not be available in other countries, though we are ...

Hahaha, that's awesome! Just remember to describe them a little... it'll be fantastic in the long run. :)