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Nutty>> Thanks for your comments! You're right about chapter 1... I've been struggling with it since I wrote it several years ago and I'm probably going to get rid of ...

Haha, I completely forgot about this poem. It's actually a senryu.

One day, I hope to be a scientist quoted in The Onion.

Hahaha, maybe! But I kind of like that ambiguity. :D Anyway, if you want your story to take precedence in your poem, consider making the details more specific. So, for ...

I like my villains creative, well-rounded, and smart. I like for them to be driven, persistent, and well-spoken. I like it when they're very proper and polite. I like it ...

Ooooh... good idea, Jiggly! I'll play around with it. Thanks! :D

Hey there, Boston! :D scratch down you're back

Hey Twixt! I think you might want to get rid of the first paragraph, if only because it didn't really catch me and your actual human story was a lot ...

Simply put, it's rather boring and dry. There is so much character development in "The Giver" and it's a really powerful story. We learn to care for Jonas and Gabe ...

Eek, Pen, I didn't see you up there! Thanks for the nit-pick! That paragraph is awkwardly written. I'll rewrite it soon! :) Hmm... Intriguingly vulnerable? Interesting description of her! I ...

Karsten>> *freaks out* No, but seriously, thank you. I thought you were only answering my question... I didn't realize that you didn't have any critique! It's highly flattering. :) Grphyon>> ...

Eli>> I just rewrote a large chunk of Chapter 4 last night at an awfully late time and I would like to sit on it for a while before posting ...

Hehehe, in a way, the artist in me kind of likes that. It's like that line from "The Year of the Cat" which goes: "She comes out of the sun ...

I totally heard of that number. ;) And yay!

I read till ' Sandpaper stay still.........". i left in the middle because I want a rating so I could read it. I foyu could do that I am ready ...