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I want the old chat back. The new one is slow to me. Plus when having a private chat it lags a lot. So old chat back please. Okie dokie. ...

Aha! There you go. Where words fail, art describes. It's pretty! It also has a very intimate feeling to it... the man seems very assured and the woman seems very ...

This is awesome.

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Hey Karsten! The rule is always focus on the character who is the most powerful. Why? Because that character has the upper hand and will manipulate people to do what ...

LOL! Yeah... there are a ridiculous amount of spoilers in here, aren't there? XD

Badges? We don't need no stinkin' badges! Nah, just kidding. Cool beans! :D

A little bit more so! Though that chapter will be cut out, so yay! It's more prologue-ish than anything, really.

Rosey>> I don't understand your comment. Where specifically does she mention how bad everything is? The overall tone of the narrative is dark, I'll admit, and the description of the ...

You need more Bond movies! :(

CONGRATULATIONS, JACKE!!!!

Kibble>> Thanks for confirming my suspicions. It is a little long, isn't it? :) I'm definitely going to tweak that part, especially as I rewrite the beginning of chapter 2. ...

“Yeah she is,” Michael answered watching the girl below dance, her beauty far surpassing her grace, which was magnificent in itself. Maybe he was over-exaggerating her beauty, but it was ...

Hey Durriedog! First of all, I would cut out the smiley. Why? Because if you have to put :D in the middle of a poem, that probably means that you're ...

Haha! Oh my... I didn't even consider the possibility of this story! You are quite creative! :D A quick thing, first! "Lets take em!" I prombted. No need to prombt ...