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Re: Premonition- Nightmare Becomes Reality
Hahaha, I knooooooow. Restarting stories is a pain! But as somebody who is currently rewriting her beginning, I can tell you that, as long as you have a direction of ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: Premonition- Nightmare Becomes Reality 2
Hey fries (again)! I couldn't leave chapter 1 part 1 all by itself, could I? ;) Okay! So first of all, I want to comment on a little grammatical nitpick ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: Premonition- Nightmare Becomes Reality
Hey fries! :D Okay! So first of all, I want more drama! Right now, she has this terrifying dream, which makes it a really dramatic opening! But then she wakes ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: Reviewer II Badge Tips
There are more people who have the Reviewer 2 badge than just Kitty and me! For instance, Writersdomain has one too. So we're not the only two! We just have ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: just a taster-let me know what you think
Hey seana! One thing you really need to do is to write in correct grammar. Right now, it's really hard to tell what you're saying because you don't capitalize the ...
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: WTF????
O_o ...discuss?
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: Uh oh....
PM Nate just in case. I'm sure he'll want to hear about this. LOL. Don't. It'll be fixed up in a day, honest. It's probably just a technical malfunction.
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: Uh oh....
Click it! Together, we will rule YWS! We shall overcome!
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: Cuss-free week in California
This is so #^%#&ing exciting!
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: Experimentation: How much is too much?
The basic rule of thumb is if you find yourself thinking more about the style and less about the story, you're paying too much attention to the wrong thing. Concentrating ...
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: Minorities
Another question. How does one avoid the "token" minority in a story? The same way you avoid any token characters... develop them properly.
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: New Year's Eve
Hey Violet June! I read this the other day, but didn't comment because I was kind of blown away! The second section made me kind of squirmy, which is totally ...
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: Priceless
Hey Emma Louise! :D I like the contrast between rich and poor, especially when you state how lonely she is, yet how envied it she is anyway! It really sends ...
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: Baby (Parenthood Dreams)
Hey Howler! Babies are indeed cute! :D With that said, the one thing that I found kind of annoying about this poem was how self-centered it is. I don't know... ...
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: Imbibe
Hey Inkwell! The thing about this poem is that each stanza contains a completely new idea that you could probably expand into a completely different poem, if that makes sense. ...
Mar 30, 2010