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Hey bhoutris! :D This sounds very much like the beginning of a scary video game with lots of zombie werewolves and such! I probably wouldn't play it, but I'm not ...

Yay! Epic fantasy is epic! And it's great to have you on YWS... our poet/story writer combos generally turn out to be our best writers, especially as they grow on ...

Hey Emma Miller! So, this seems more like a grocery list of things that you enjoy from someone. Which is good, for a start, but you're definitely going to want ...

Hey jemjive! :D I think this would be awesome if, instead of just telling us about the scar that you have, you would tell us how and why you got ...

Aw, math class is fun though! :D I've seen you around critiquing works! It's great to see you out on YWS. :) Also, if you need any help with your ...

Hey BigM! First of all, a nitpick! Weeds convert carbon dioxide to oxygen as well! In fact, most of the oxygen produced on this Earth is by grass... which is ...

I can't stop my fingers from trembling. Hold them straight, flat, in front of my face and watch them dance out of rhythm. And I'm not sure why--I can only ...

Dude, that elephant is one of the coolest things about YWS! :D Nah, you don't have to critique twenty times... though if you want to, feel free! :D But! I ...

Dam Beavery straight! :D

Haha, you're among good company! I remember I did the same when I joined when I was your age. And it was awesome. And somehow, people loved me and feared ...

Good start, good start... but you need more destruction and stuff. This is simply not a finished story! This is the introduction! You need: - Deepening conflict. - A resolution ...

Hey Ikafe! :D First of all: whoa! Back up! This persona actually... killed her lover???? OMG. That is so completely dramatic! The first thing I'm wondering is why? I mean... ...

Biffle! Where are all the carrots? There are definitely not enough carrots in here! And dams! Where are all the dams? Don't you dare censor yourself! All in all, I ...

LOL! No, it's a good thing! I like having opinions about characters... it makes them that much more real to me! It's when I don't really have any opinions on ...

Lol! No, it doesn't have to be the best and it doesn't have to be correct. I like what Scott Adams said about it: "Creativity is allowing yourself to make ...