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Eek! These are awesome! It looks like some sort of tattoo thing you're doing... which is good! Now, develop them further! :) I'm curious and I want to see these ...

Hey observer! :D First of all, you really need to check for silly typos and such! I recommend writing in something like Microsoft Word, which will underline a word red ...

Well... you can always rename the novel, if you want! Just go to your main novel's page and click "edit." If you want to delete the entire novel... well... just ...

Less than a year till I graduate and become a biochemical engineer! Mwha! :D

Haha, no problem! ^_^ What if you hint at it? I mean, yes, it's under the surface, but it would probably surface out in other ways! I'm remembering this kid ...

Hey Jigs! I read chapter 2 and I'm still not quite sure what's happening. It's very disjointed! You ended with Maharaj. It just seems strange. As far as the mother ...

Hey Jigsaw! Your other piece looked lonely, but when I looked at it, I realized I had noooo idea what was happening. So it goes! I'd figure I would look ...

Hey Barrett! Comedy is more than just exaggeration... it's also about timing! Right now, this piece is all about exaggeration, but you're ignoring the crucial piece of timing! A couple ...

I don't think advanced critiques are counted in your review count. Problem?

Read "The Man Who Was Thursday: A Nightmare." It's a wonderful book and it'll show you how to do really good (and realistic) dream sequences. I think it'll really help ...

I'm not quite sure what is going on in high schools nowadays, but instead of having some sort of purely "sex-ed" thing, I think you should require a health class. ...

A kind of gritty, informal style. I've read things like what your style doesn't seem very firm or as strong as it could be yet because you're not quite getting ...

Hey Demetri! This story is a little bit weird! The sounds "Ahahaha-ahaughhaughhaughaha-AHAHAHA" and "Oh, Charlie, Oh Charlie, OhCharlieOhCharlieOh…Chaaaarrrllliiieeee" make it sound quite humorous,

Hey Kammara! :D First of all, a couple of typos! If your cruel and selfish, just for you to please,

Hey Makar! This has all the elements of an assigned poetry review, which I am supposing it is! And this is something of a good thing because I bet this ...