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Hey Eli! The main thing I have against this poem is it's very telly! So basically, you're telling us who she is, but you're not actually showing us anything special ...

Hey Ray! :D This may just be a pet peeve of mine, but don't start off with saying that there are no words to describe [insert something here] because as ...

Tangent, mi amor! Thanks for posting this. :) Now, your poem can basically be broken up into three parts! 1. Orca whales swimming in a too small sea for their ...

Parodies = awesome! Especially Star Wars parodies. They're just fun. :) A couple of things! You misspelled "Matrix" several times throughout this piece... it shouldn't be "Martix!" Also, this might ...

Hey scary panda! :D Definitely very random! I was kind of lost, because I'm not very familiar with why this scene is relevant, so my advice is to make it ...

Chat bug! SPEW signed up on Safari 4.0.5 (Mac OS 10.5.8) and even though he kept logging off, it still said he was there. Kind of weird!

You probably know this by now, but the novels stuff! :D Although it counts for reviews now for your overall count, it doesn't count for reviews in the leaderboards, nor ...

Okay, so I was reading this again, just because it's an interesting problem! Anyway, this time I noticed this: It was easy to track. Mickey Mulligan, would-be bully, full-time idiot, ...

LOL. Yeah... I cut out Chapter 1 and so Chapter 3 is now Chapter 2. It's much more streamlined! Sadie's 15! I think that's young, but then again, that was ...

Hey Temptation! A forbidden love thing, eh? Neat! I'm curious as to what their ages would be as well... both of them seem really young to me, so I'm kind ...

Miss Lovely Loveless! :D Okay, so maybe I've read too many stories and such (read: definitely read too much) but when I read your first paragraph, I was like, "Aha, ...

Hey RedSun! Right now, this piece tries to explain itself too much. I realize that this is a fantasy world of sorts, so it's necessary to introduce the reader to ...

I reread this piece again! It's not bad, really, it's not! And it does give us a better sense of who our hero is and it gives us a concrete ...

Nah, lol. It's something to do with Nate changing the formats of the novels... it did some weird things to some of my stories too that I didn't space out! ...

The cause of the eruption. No, seriously, this stuff is crazy. Bring all your pets inside and don't go out if you don't have to. Stay indoors. The stuff you ...