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Ack! Ack! Bill the Cat! Omg, your avvie is amazing, RedBird! :D Now, to the poem! It's really really random right now... which makes sense because you don't even know ...

Hey Lord Anzius! This is a very skimpy intro for such an important question! What you generally do in introductions is you introduce previous ideas of who God is by ...

JD! First of all, nice story! I kind of liked it! I want more information as to who Bryan is and how she met him, etc., but not bad! So ...

Thanks a lot to all of you. Thanks for liking it. And Snoink the dresses I create are for those typical models. I don't think i would wear the top ...

Hey Oisin! Neat name! :D Now, on to the story! I thought it was a bit strange. You had all this pretty language describing someone puking out alcohol. And I ...

Hey Love! :D This was a rather sad story! I wasn't expecting to be this sad! I mean, mostly what people do to make things sad is to randomly kill ...

Hey Eli! This is a perfect example why adjectives and adverbs should be avoided like the devil in poetry! Adjectives serve the same purpose as salt. Put it on a ...

Hey Arahnia! What a lovely name! And what a lovely concept! Cliff diving has always terrified me, but it's fantastic... I'm pretty sure that if I were to write a ...

This. Is. The. Most. Awesome. Poem. Ever. The main comment I have is that I object to the whole ham part. Less ham, more pickle. Also, I love your rhyme ...

Venturepants! You have a fun name! :D Anyway, I think I may have ADD or something... when I was reading your poem, I kept stopping and going. The effect that ...

Hey Yuri! So, she's blind, eh? ;) This means that you've only did a fourth of the poem! She still has taste, touch, and smell! And trust me... you remember ...

Hey Thane! :D So, this looks like more of a rap then poetry, if that makes sense, just because of the constant rhyming and jaggedness of it all. So that's ...

Hey Tariq! Since you brought this up again, I'm assuming you want critiques! Anyway, I thought this was really bland. It felt like you wanted to give a message, but ...

Hey! The first skirt was fun! I really liked that. I'm thinking you would probably use some sort of stiff, twisty fabric for that sort of stuff. And yes... I ...

Hey Rhiannon! :D I too thought this was a very cavalier way of dealing with this sort of thing! Maybe too cavalier. I kept on thinking, "Well, if she doesn't ...