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Hey confused.pirate! Interesting idea! :D Now! Let's make it poetic! One of the cool things about poetry is that it's like the Looney Tunes... anything can happen! So instead of ...

Ahhh! My worst nightmare! Nah, just kidding. ;) Anyway, this story was interesting! I don't know though... starting off with a dream sequence sounds like kind of a cop-out for ...

Hey stelagineva! :D I like your title a lot and the whole idea of being so in love that you just want to die... it's an interesting (albeit, masochistic) idea. ...

Hey shizunarui! Welcome to YWS! :D Your story is very dramatic! It seems rather like a soap opera, in fact. This isn't necessarily a bad thing though... I definitely like ...

Hello BeautifulDoom! :D So, Bondgirl was right as far as the beginning goes! You're kind of contradicting yourself, so if you continue with this piece, you'll definitely want to edit ...

Hey allmixedup! :D First of all, there's a couple of typos in here that you can fix! For instance, "stutter" is spelled as "studder" and other typos. So just run ...

Hey Vitamin! :D The first picture is gorgeous, mostly because of the vibrancy of the flower and the fact that you only highlighted one side, which made our eyes automatically ...

Hey Hawkie! :D First of all, nice images! I loved the specific images that you used... it helped formed a concrete image in my mind, which is always good! Now, ...

Hey Jane! :D A good story... really! Very true and poignant, especially in times like these. Plus, it's written well, which is always a bonus. ;) My main advice for ...

Hey Jasmine! So! This kind of reminds me of some of the older poems I did... which may or may not be a bad thing! :P Anyway! In the first ...

Classy! I love you but... that title is soooo wrong on so many levels. XD Also, why is this in fantasy? It hardly seems like a fantasy short story at ...

Humor works better than random poems. ;)

Snoink: Them's some sweet prokaryotes you've got there. I'll forward you along some adult stem cells :wink: Stem cells are decidedly eukaryotic and thus a pain to work with though! ...

I say you go to the level which will give you the most money.

Name: Rita Hayworth Species: Human Age: 21 Gender: Female Occupation: Engineer Starting Location: Forest. She doesn't appear with Saare Hathrim though. Appearance: Dweeby-looking. About 5'0", nerdy gl