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Become a minion...

Hey UnknownPoet! I actually really really like the ambiguity of the piece... it makes my imagination run wild. I'm assuming that there's sex involved. Why? Why not? :D Especially since ...

I actually think Frost is over-rated. >.> That is to say, I adore some of his poems. Like "Home Burial." That's just a lovely poem with so much intensity inherent ...

Uh oh... an eavesdropper superhero? Dun dun dun! Are you psychic? O_O

Antifoam! The new rules are basically that you must BOW TO ME. Nah, not really. Welcome back! :D

I disagree with a major point of this... you're a fabulous writer. So don't worry... it's not a lie. Really. ;) About everything else? I don't know if this helps, ...

Hey Kah! I was able to see it using Mac magic. :) Anyway! My main comment is that it really doesn't look like a flower... it looks more like a ...

Hey samasaurus! :D Nice story! Very touching. I like how she keeps on talking to Oliver... it reminds me of several widows, actually. Anyway, I would like to suggest showing ...

Hey Gryphon! :D I just found this, thanks to freudianlisp, and I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this story and all the characters. Even though the Bookworm ...

Hey Sarebear! :D First of all, I really like the jagged feeling of this... the poem is written in such a way that it is evident that the one hiking ...

Hey babymagic! :D Right now, you've started at a rather odd place! Most people would start at the beginning of the battle scene, not at the end. Mind you, it's ...

Ooh, interesting story! :D A couple of things... I actually think that it would be better to start with a sex scene in the beginning. Why? First of all, it's ...

Ooh, I liked this. :D A couple of comments... I really don't like the hanging word that you have on every one of your stanzas. I would kill it, if ...

Hey Hannah! I just found this. Soooo... I figured I would critique it! :P The dialogue is rather bleh. I generally like to see more action in between the dialogue, ...

Hey Tenyo! :D Sooooo... this piece. XD Yeah, basically, life doesn't translate well to fiction. What was that cliche... "stranger than fiction"? However, I think that you're pressing a little ...